It was a dark blustering night. I was in the cellar with George
trying to find something of value. As we ventured farther in there was a horrid
smell and a cleansing howl. Foot steps seemed to get closer. Still no sign of
something to burglarize. Then I saw it running was to only option. There was a
flash a lightning at the cellar door. And a mysteries adumbration. It was coming.
I heard its wicked snarl it inched me back. Then I saw the shades of its orange
and black fur. The tiger was blocking our escape. I knew there was only one way
out.
I like how you had a lot of descriptive language. I also liked how you made your story interesting. I think you should find something more interesting than running. e.g. Then I saw it Bolting
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