Once there was a man that no one knew. He would stand and
act as he not exist. Now he often appears between two trees. Some people said
something terrible happened there. In tell he helped and did not stare. He said
you shall know on the second of November evacuate the area. And then as the man
turned around the mystery dissipated. On the second of November no one dared to
go there. Then a plane crashed where he closed off and the only thing left was
the two trees standing there. A bright light raised up into the air. I knew he
was good not they remember from the iron statue standing there.
Hello Saltycats,
ReplyDeleteYou have used some interesting vocabulary e.g. 'evacuate' and 'dissipated'. Honestly, several of your sentences do not make sense. Please word process your stories in a 'Word' document first, then copy and paste them into your blog. 'Word' will help you realize where you have made many of your mistakes. Keep on writing and improving.
Sincerely,
Mrs. Van