Thursday 2 November 2017

Once there was a forgiving man Swimming thought a life of noble peace. He celebrated existence tomorrow and tomorrow tell his life did not exist. People said when he was gone he'll flame in our souls. And live in those big white fluffy clouds. You can investigate in this man but humanity may not believe what has been in front of them the whole time. Then from one end of the universe to the other many people will question this peaceful man. And his land...of the invisible.
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  1. HillcrestBlog35 November 2017 at 08:54

    Hello Saltycat,
    The prompt words are fairly well spread out in your writing. This is a unique story. You have used some descriptive vocabulary e.g. 'noble', 'investigate', and 'humanity'. You would benefit from word processing your story in a 'Word' document first, then copying and pasting it into your blog. 'Word' will help you realize where you have made spelling and grammar mistakes. Congratulations on completing the 100 Word Challenge Week #8.
    Sincerely,
    Mrs. Van

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